Love Poems by Susan Cowger 6 Comments Water on waterVast surface tensions shudderYour lips on my palm ` Have you ever noticed how a love poem doesn’t need to mention the word love? Have you ever noticed that mentioning you are serving, suddenly makes it self-serving? Interesting. ~
Craig Schafer says May 6, 2009 at 7:20 am April 4hows this one on water water in the sky water in the air to much water everywhere April 4, 2009 12:05 PM Reply
Susan Cowger says April 6, 2009 at 1:01 am Chazzz–oh my. A word-meister. Kathy!! Yes yes yes!! More about Mama!! Excellent haiku! Reply
Kathy says April 5, 2009 at 11:25 pm Mama baked with lovejoyfully we licked our plateslaughter… sweet as pie Reply
Charles Fishburn says April 5, 2009 at 6:51 am paper covers rockscissors cut paper at lastsharp blades of sunlight (feel better Bethany!) Reply
Craig and Bethany says April 5, 2009 at 5:19 am On the one REALLY nice day all spring I’m flat on by back with the pukin’ flu. (sigh) gush of pulse, saltedgeyser, hold together ameniscus of breath Reply
April 4hows this one on water
water in the sky
water in the air to much
water everywhere
April 4, 2009 12:05 PM
Chazzz–oh my. A word-meister.
Kathy!! Yes yes yes!! More about Mama!! Excellent haiku!
Mama baked with love
joyfully we licked our plates
laughter… sweet as pie
paper covers rock
scissors cut paper at last
sharp blades of sunlight
(feel better Bethany!)
On the one REALLY nice day all spring I’m flat on by back with the pukin’ flu.
(sigh)
gush of pulse, salted
geyser, hold together a
meniscus of breath
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