Night by Susan Cowger 4 Comments Fields of strong young starsRecite guttural prayersDisguise hope as night ~ Hope for us is in death. Pure irony. `
Susan Cowger says April 10, 2009 at 2:01 am Way to go EP! Chazzzz you were made to haiku, go ahead and quit your day job. Reply
Craig Schafer says April 10, 2009 at 1:41 am raging tongues heaved forthdark expanse envelopes meunfurled with hope Reply
Charles Fishburn says April 9, 2009 at 7:01 pm Here is my effort from yesterday: cool night air asks butboldness cowers embers popilluminating rough blue moonlit stonesexit avails itselfdestiny calls out smoke aroma waftsinquiring huddled crowd pressestears reveal a truth Additional thoughts at chazzz.com. Reply
Tattoo Girl says April 9, 2009 at 2:48 pm A life in secretsTransparency means unease.Turn the other way. Prevail. Reply
Way to go EP! Chazzzz you were made to haiku, go ahead and quit your day job.
raging tongues heaved forth
dark expanse envelopes me
unfurled with hope
Here is my effort from yesterday:
cool night air asks but
boldness cowers embers pop
illuminating
rough blue moonlit stones
exit avails itself
destiny calls out
smoke aroma wafts
inquiring huddled crowd presses
tears reveal a truth
Additional thoughts at chazzz.com.
A life in secrets
Transparency means unease.
Turn the other way.
Prevail.